Tales of the Parodyverse - Gamona and flesh go together

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Hatman

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Subj: Gamona and flesh go together
Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 06:01:58 pm EDT

Reply Subj: A great chapter to flesh out the supporting cast
Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 12:28:08 pm EDT (Viewed 439 times)

> I always like these kinds of chapters, focusing on supporting characters (as my fondness for any Avengers story that features Jarvis will prove).

I felt it was important to establish the cast and status quo before I went about threatening it.

> It's good that E-Razor is shaping up, but at the same time it makes me a little sad that his worldview is warped enough that he'd think his mother would be proud of him even though he's still a criminal.

He's got a very skewed, limited worldview from an unsuitable mentor.

> I wasn't really surprised by the reveal that Gamona and Emilio were having sex; I think you've used that tact a few times now so it's a little easier to spot.

I have? Hmm, that's an interesting insight into my psyche.

> Good chapter. I'm rereading all the Boss Deadeyes stuff before proceeding with Doorman #4, so having another chapter available is great!

Excellent. Proceed.