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Visionary

Subj: Hospitality is very important on Caph
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 at 08:46:28 pm EDT
Reply Subj: And I though the service was special when the hotel left a mint on your pillow...
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 at 07:06:11 pm EDT


> Being in bed with Miiri is great fun... I could stand to read about it more often, especially when it's this informative.

Remember that pixellated A.I. girl you were kissing on Victory in the Parodyverse day?

By the way, did I imagine that you did an illustration of that? It's not in my archive.

> I thought it was an excellent scene spotlighting the mother of Vizh's children, and I do quite like the two of them together. The comparison below to Frodo is a good point, and a nice illustration of the journey this joke-born character has gone on.

She's served her purpose now, though, so there's no reason to keep her alive.

> I'm also happy to hear that Odoona, Kaara and Deeela will be coming back to earth as well. I look forward to each of them getting to pursue their dreams.

Don't count on actually having four Caphans return to Earth. There's still two more chapters of this story to go.

I only say things like that to cheer you up.

> Of course, Kaara seems to be getting a bit of a jump on hers, so to speak. I look forward to finding out what extravagant price the Shoggoth has set for Vaahir to pay. After what he's gone through, I shudder to think what would be left that he could find intimidating...

And although a few people have expressed interest in it, Vaahir's quest does not form part of this particular story arc.

> Excellent stuff (though I'm naturally biased on this chapter)!

You might enjoy the first part of the next chapter too. I think one more reader reply and we'll be good to go.