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Visionary

Subj: It's all there in the files. In fact it's probably dripping out of the filing cabinet by now.
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 07:13:29 pm EDT
Reply Subj: Such thoughtful conversations... I'm glad Space Ghost was never around to teach them how to behave at a party.
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 06:54:37 pm EDT


> Ah, the Juniors are growing up... and not just Kerry (whom Vizh would still be sad to see leave. You really need a deep explanation why?

Why Kerry would leave? Well for all her talk I don't think she would without some external cause. The most likely? She's 18, she's going to go to college. She can room with FA.

> Kerry was a big part of getting Vizh out of his funk after Cheryl was gone... for quite a while, she was the only family he had, and the fact that she needed him to help look out for her kept him going. Now, neither of them need to rely on that dynamic any longer, but it still wouldn't be easy to see it go.)

I think they still have that dynamic, but it's not been affirmed since they were seperated in the Parody War. Since then Vizh has become a father of twins (who were waiting at home once Kerry got back) and Kerry has grown closer to Danny and even possibly matured very slightly. They've both got some adjustments to make. If only there was some story arc where we could throw them together for a chapter and see what happened.

> Some interesting developments with Captain Courageous. I wonder exactly what his version of "the right thing" will entail in this case.

We'll see. I thought he needed an ethical dilemma, and I wanted at least one dialogue between Kip and Danny, who are pretty much opposites.

> Nice to see somebody talk some sense into Jasper, and a very nice use of the celebration on Caph to illustrate the need to go on. That Gaz is a smart guy. Er, in a way.

Like his fahter, he's very smart in some very specific ways. Just once in a while I like to remind people about that.

> The little punk *is* getting off somewhat easy for his role in things, but if it's goodbye for a while I think that's probably best. He tried to make things right (albeit when almost all other options were eliminated) after all.

You can do the tie-in spanking story if you insist.

> I do hope Vizh has the common sense to let Miiri run interference to keep his house from collecting any more Caphans. Hopefully Hamboy has a big apartment... providing he wasn't evicted over three-months past due rent.

More on Miiri's interference coming up. And more on Zeela, Doolia, Aatis, Jemiira, Hooli, Fantiis, and Sooon.

> Looking forward to the next bit... although the one setting mentioned has me nervous...

Lots of people get nervous speaking in a throneroom.