> A nice job of starting the resolutions with this chapter. I thought you did a nice job of talking the characters through what happened and how it affected Liu Xi.
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Liu Xi is starting to get more and more used to disasters, so naturally she handles each one a little better.
> On a side note, I am curious as to why you often seem to write your stories from Hatman's perspective rather than from that of your own characters. Is it a conscious choice when you start out, or just the way the story flowed?
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I thought of multiple different ways to write it. Usually they follow a certain theme, and in this one it was discovery. Since Hatman was, no offense, the most clueless one in the story, naturally he had the most discovery to do.
But that's just the first chapter. The second one starts from Anna's point of view, and the third starts from Lara's.
> I look forward to seeing where Lara went...
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Chapter 3.
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