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10,000 words of conclusion from... the Hooded Hood.

Subj: Uh.. Mr. Waston, sir. I have found a possible small problem with the story...
Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 04:14:24 pm EST (Viewed 516 times)
Reply Subj: The Moderator Saga #48: Absolute Moderation
Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 02:11:31 pm EST


Now I haven't read the story but there is a problem in your recap:

> Ben Hermes, Semi-Transparent Lad, was drafted as a Moderator minion in this new reality.

Ok. That's right. Hermes was remade as an Agent of S.P.A.M.

> After a run-in with Kat Gillespie where he decided to let her go he now seeks only to escape the Iowa compound if he can find a vehicle to get away in.

But, Ben never had a "run-in with Kat". Kat clashed with another remade Hero of mine: Fred Harris a.k.a. Ham-Boy.

More comments regarding this story will follow after I finish reading it.