| HH has just scared the crap out of four 10-year old boys by telling ghost stories
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Hatman
Member Since: Thu Jan 01, 1970 Posts: 618
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Subj: That and Alex's birthday sleepover weekendPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 04:06:06 pm EST
| Reply Subj: We figured we didn't see you at the chat because you might have been working on this Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:35:54 pm EST (Viewed 542 times) |
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> Great job tying all of these things together. I found it interesting that the Hood was instrumental in fixing things considering he was the one who set events in motion in the first place, as I recall.
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He had his motives and goals, yes. And really he hardly did anything at the end; just one little nudge.
> A small note is Salieri's last name is Meng, not Leng, by the way.
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I've corrected it in this chapter. Do I need to do so in previous stories?
> I don't like this lack of Mr. Epitome at the end of the story, especially since Shrike had input into this. I hope he's not erased from existence.
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Noted.
> I'm guessing we have to wait and hear from Vizh to see if Brap made it back, eh?
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Indeed.
> After such a Herculean effort to wrap this thing up I will definitely have to do an epilogue. Thanks for all your hard work on this round robin!
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You're welcome. Let's not do that again!
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