Tales of the Parodyverse - That's either really good or really bad.

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Anime Jason

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Manga Shoggoth

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Subj: That's either really good or really bad.
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 04:27:26 pm EST (Viewed 340 times)

Reply Subj: Now, this one was good...
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 at 07:27:41 am EST (Viewed 394 times)

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> I usually find your work is something of a struggle to read (I wish I knew why - from a technical point of view [my usual bugbear] your writing is fine).
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> This one, however, I rather enjoyed reading. Well done.

I've been trying to focus on adding a lot more detail to my stories. So it either has to be that, or that you get bored easily, since this story had more rapid action than most do.