> I thought the growing despair of Liu Xi was well done as each of her personal nightmares played out - a forced marriage, loss of friends, sense of personal failure and responisbility etc. I actually wrote a follow-up chapter but it's been superceded by other people's stories.
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That's good.
> I was a little disppointed to hear not see such dramatic character-defining moments in the lives of some of the rest of your cast - especially if you intend them to remember these things after this storyline.
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Unfortunately I can do only one at a time without the chapter becoming ridiculously long. One of the drawbacks of trying my new experiment with slowly adding more detail to what I write.
> A comment on continuity:
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> I'd assumed the Lair Mansion had been deleted. The new team's working out of the Lair Tower (which I thibnk is a refurbished Twin Parody Tower). However, it doesn't preculde the moderator keeping the Mansion for his own recreations purposes, I suppose.
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The new post says "Lair Tower" instead, but I'm not sure it makes much difference.
