At 4am this morning it seemed to me that what we were missing were: 1. A clear goal for or heroes to thwart or our villain to achieve; 2. A ticking clock; 3. Evidence of the Moderator working to a plan; 4. Ways of bringing the threat level up and involving some of the individal characters; 5. A reason to bring the cast together for a final confrontation.

> A fun, chilling chapter with excellent character work on the villain!

I'm still hoping to get in bits that cover how Salieri goes to get his mother and how the good guys recruit VelcoVixen.