> An amusing job of establishing the ties between the various casts running about, and setting up some complications for Sam (and poor Mumph). That was a fairly strong reaction she had in meeting young Salieri... I'm sure she'll definitely leave an impression on him. Literally, if she was wearing any rings.
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I may have misjudged this one. I wanted a snarky, awkward, competetive relationship between two clever but socially inexperienced teens. Most people just seem to feel Sam was being rude.
> Looking forward to more!
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I've got a couple more chapters in me, I think.
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