> Yes, I'm already writing the next bit, since it's the holidays I've got much more time. I'm glad I did a good job to portray Aellas somewhat enclosed world, I hope to explore deeper into the less obvious issues someone living like that will feel.
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I look forward to it.
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> Do you think I should continue splitting the story with half of it told by first person?
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I quite liked it, as it took us from observer (as Aella was herself, overlooking the sea) and quickly brought us into her mindset, allowing us to empathize with her isolation. I would say the first person viewpoint should definitely be kept.
