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Rhiannon
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Visionary

Subj: If you think this is enchanted you should see part four.
Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 at 12:55:59 pm EST
Reply Subj: An enchanted beginning!
Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 at 06:04:54 pm EST (Viewed 489 times)


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> A lovely introduction for a very mysterious character. I thought you did an excellent job of describing her compact world and allowing us to see it as both beautiful and confining, connecting us with the character. I hope you have further plans for this lonely young woman...

Yes, I'm already writing the next bit, since it's the holidays I've got much more time. I'm glad I did a good job to portray Aellas somewhat enclosed world, I hope to explore deeper into the less obvious issues someone living like that will feel.

Do you think I should continue splitting the story with half of it told by first person?