> First there was holding Donar hostage waaaay back in your original Xmas epic, now the little guy is hoping that politicians who may want something from the current Fairy Queen will be willing to listen to the girl who is her prophesized replacement.
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He means well at least... and how big of a mess can this cause?
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> Another fun chapter. I have a couple ideas how to tie in to the Dancer/Cinderbelle aspect of the story, one appropriate for the overall tone, one not so much. We'll see if I can get to it.
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I'm not sure there is an overall tone quite yet, as many people found the first chapter overly ominous... and then there was the nudity of the second chapter. I'd say you're probably safe. Either way, I look forward to seeing anything you might want to contribute!
