> > I really enjoyed the sound, well-reasoned advice that Asil received prior to her date. Not only was it a fun scene, but it worked in a nice bit of character for everyone in only a few minor lines. I greatly missed Dancer's presence in the scene, though, as if anyone is able to comment on bad dates it would be her. And Tandi's bafflement at the underwear issue was perfect.
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> > Tom's application of his new-found powers is an interesting twist on things. I have no idea what it means, or what the common knowledge of his new abilities among the evil elite might portend, but I'm guessing that the raining blood is a sign of something bad. Just a feeling I have.
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> > Good to see the scum-sucking evil bastard thought better of associating with the Heckfire Club after seeing Asil's reaction. You should have seen what I would have called him had he not balked.
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> > This continues to be a fun story... Looking forward to the next part!
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