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> This was an excellent story and a great deal of fun! For me, it was a real treat to read Teresa's account of the various stages of the Parody War. It added quite a fresh perspective to view it from someone that distant.
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I hadn't actually intended to write all that. Everything up to the first divider was planned to be the first paragraph. Then I actually wrote it.
> You also did a great job of conveying the fear that an invasion causes, as the attacks by the Avawarriors were tense and gripping. I've always liked the poetic use of Teresa's gifts, and there were some especially well described bits in here as she unleashed the potential around her.
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And she has now also discovered a new creative way of using her power.
> You write PV continuity very well... I look forward to more!
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Don't hold your breath.
I actually only wrote this as Daddy told me to, though he wasn't actually serious when he said it. I wrote this anyway. Now he can't complain about my reply being too short, too long maybe...
