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Manga Shoggoth

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Manga Shoggoth

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Subj: And now, the comments.
Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 at 05:58:02 am EDT (Viewed 463 times)
Reply Subj: Ambiguity is a wonderful thing (comments on the story to follow)
Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 at 04:51:21 am EDT (Viewed 453 times)

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> I should point out, by the way, that the help referred to from me in the titles refers to help getting the story on the internet. The only contribution I made to the actual content was the ruthless impostion of punctuation.

That's a relief.


Quite a good piece. You merged your previous material in well, and added a few very evocative descriptions.

This actually triggered flashbacks to the Three Day Week when I was a child - less, of course, the preponderance of electric gadgets. Classrooms were simpler then...





As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment. I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.