> > An excellent conclusion to this fine story. I thought you handled all the characters perfectly, especially the Foxglove brood.
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> I have to give Kirk credit for some of that... Long ago, he wrote me with how he felt Dream would react to the events of the first chapter. It just took a while getting there... and then I found I wasn't quite qualified to write his actual rant against the protesters, so I cheated and skipped it.
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See, if you had included a Cyberman or frumpy British dowager maybe he would have written a tie-in
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> > The nod to Mags's adventurous side was a clever moment, and I enjoyed Glory's part in this.
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> I'm glad, because I enjoyed Glory's part in this as well. I just wish I had thought of some clever dialog for her. I always enjoy her delivery in other people's stories.
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She's a fan favorite
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> > Reverand Fleetwood was well used here too, both in his counsel with Hallie and with the assembled Legion. The hate mail bit was a nice touch as well.
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> Just trying to keep those particular issues brewing until I have time to address them properly. I'm not sure what the ranking in Legion Hate-mail might be, but I imagined that Epitome gets a lot of college students calling him a Fascist. I imagine CSFB's isn't exactly hate mail so much as fundamentalists telling him they're praying for his soul...
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> > All that was missing was how Vizh would view these current events, though I suppose we'll see them soon enough.
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> Yes, Vizh looks like a deadbeat dad in this story. That's what I get for starting it when he was on his quest with Asil.
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Tha just means you'll have to write more with him and the kids. I'm sure no one will mind.
