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Hatman
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Visionary

Subj: Re: "The Harvest at the Homestead!"
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 at 03:59:39 pm EDT (Viewed 479 times)
Reply Subj: "The Harvest at the Homestead!"
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 at 04:31:39 pm EDT


> A good ol' slobberknocker for an autumn afternoon. It was a well choreographed fight scene, with a good ending... What more could one ask than a little mindless violence for football season? Both of your characters are very versatile, and you used that advantage well in the story.
>

Football season starts in the spring here, and ends in November.

I just hope I didn't go too far in allowing Harvester the ability to fly, but since he needs to keep his arms rigid like wings I figured that would be a reasonable liability.

> You need to write on a whim more often...

If only I had the time. I had to turn down my church's youth group yesterday in regards to being a group leader because I'm simply too booked.

~Hat~