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HH

In Reply To
Al B. Harper

Subj: You might want to look at that wobbly leg sometime
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 at 08:33:31 pm EDT
Reply Subj: *Falls off chair*
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 at 07:44:04 pm EDT


> SHE is his mother?! And the new Shaper! Talk about your interesting plot progression.

I thought I'd better throw that in before the haitus.

> And this story progresses nicely too, with many tangents seeming to all be related somehow. My one fault was with the portrayal of VV as a mindless sex bimbo. I prefer a more subtly sexy VV, with a bit of panache.

Well, I think Vicki was probably teasing Danny rather than being serious, but I guess with this many characters one or two are bound to slip off tone. I just did a quick check and discovered to my horror that of the 111 characters appearing or mentioned in this chapter so far I created 51 of them and helped in creating another 6.

> And...no Harry this time? Aww...

He's busy.