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Subj: That's what it's here for
Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 at 01:59:03 pm EDT (Viewed 351 times)
Reply Subj: Lots of intrigue in this chapter...
Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 at 12:07:48 pm EDT


> I enjoyed seeing Keiko work her way through the "clean-up" phase, although i hate to see grilled hot dogs wasted.  Personally, I would think that getting rid of the murder weapon would be a high priority, especially since her presence in the bank links her to Matt. 

She's not a big fan of hot dogs.  Especially "you don't know what those are made of" hot dogs.

And Keiko made a judgement call about the knife.  She always had it, so it's more prudent to clean it up than to get rid of it and have people notice it's suddenly missing. 


> I do worry about Sean's reaction...  He's not likely to learn any lesson if he thinks what just transpired was great.  She's going to get stuck cleaning up after him for all time now, if she's not careful.

Keiko wants him to learn but not the hard way. 


> As always, an engrossing read!

Thanks.