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Sexist HH
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Visionary

Subj: Well, not for a girl, anyway.
Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 at 07:27:02 am EDT
Reply Subj: "Staying for Breakfast" is *not* the appropriate outcome of a first date, no matter what the prior track record.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 at 11:20:34 pm EDT


> So, we have some new villains, and a cordial pair they are too. Personally, I like them... I always enjoy pairs that maintain their manners in all exchanges. Of course, their apparent twisted feelings in regards to the LL makes me look forward to the team being rude to them.

I'm sure the time will come for that.

> Speaking of the team, it's seeming pretty slim right now. Not that there's anything wrong with that... I look forward to seeing the four of them in action together. And not in the CSFB way. Still, it could be a fun opportunity to see some really tight teamwork.

I'm hoping to get the team into some kind of battle before the end of the chapter.

> I quite enjoyed Mumphrey's version of a resignation. Really, all such things should include going out for ice cream afterwards. He should take Asil too. And bring some back for me.

Noted.

> Nice to see things are working out poorly for the jerk running the Bean and Donut. There are some things you just don't do, and firing Shep in the middle of the lunch crowd is certainly one of them. I hope this isn't the last of the B&D though... Kirby Lee's just doesn't serve decent coffee and crullers.

Things can only get worse for him from here when his dad hears what he's done.

> A fun exchange between Hallie and Lisa. I wonder what horrible cosmic business she and Chronicler have to attend to. And whether Quoth is coming back, or will be catfood.

Quoth wasn't the one that got eaten, only the one that complained.

> Good to hear that the "Bloody Vengeance" had a happy retirement... some nicely tied up loose ends there. Now, is the survival harness connected to something? It seems to me that there should be a tether involved somehow...

There is indeed a thether. See part 2 of UT#322.

> An interesting dilemma with the Avawarriors. Winning a war is awfully messy business... Here's hoping an acceptable solution can be found.

We'll cover that later this chapter. It might not seem we're actually tying up plotlines here, but we are.

> Lots of fun plotlines spinning here... I look forward to the next part! (I need to keep an eye on this Harry guy...)

Noted.