> > I don't feel I'm writing "small cast" yet, because I still have a large number of supporting characters to deal with.
> Well, considering small cast for you is epic for me, that makes sense.
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One thing I'd like to try is to have a small core LL cast and see if that encouraged more people to write adventures for them.
> > > I enjoyed Hatman and Epitome's exchange. I think things have definitely cooled between the two; fighting for your very existence and that of the entire universe shoulder-to-shoulder will do that.
> > I figured it was time to show a different kind of interaction between them, at least on this occasion.
> Do you think the animosity is still there or would they be getting over it?
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I never really had much to do with that interaction anyhow, so I think it's for you and Shrike to decide. I see Yuki and Epitome having perhaps moved to a different relationship now, but again that's down to the poster. I don't see the CSFB!-Epitome relationship changing at all. > > It's a shame that I don't trust this Harry fellow either (and I admit, I also wondered if he had a connection to Xander's familiar hamster).
> > Actually, I originally called the character Sam, then changed it so as not to conflict with Sam Wilson, Falcon. Now I'm thinking I should have made it Ben.
> As in Ben the Bulbasaur (I forget if that was Exile or G-Eyed that had him, I think Exile. I believe Bry had a Squirtle). Sarah's dating a Pokemon?
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Maybe Dave, then.
> I see you're intentionally going for a generic nice guy type of name with this guy...clearly he can't be trusted.
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Not that the readers round here are paranoid or anything.
Mind you, the LL also make a few checks later in this chapter.
> > > I'm not sure if I'm comforted or not with Lisa as the new Destroyer...especially if her nigh-indestructible cat has gotten an upgrade.
> > As Vizh says, the role traditionally goes to a villain.
> Here's a thought; has Lisa then lost her summoning powers? I imagine she could still maintain them with her Destroyer power, which would trump her previous office. Are we going to be seeing a new keeper of the Booke of Law then?
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The Booke of the Law and the office that goes with it were destroyed in UT#300. It would take the agreement of the Triumverate to reinstate it and the hundreds of other minor offices destroyed by the Parody Master - but there is not yet a consensus, with the Shaper refusing to approve such measures.
> > > Vizh really shouldn't complain about a Survival Harness. Bry probably would've killed for one of those after all the Pain Chair's he's been strapped into.
> > On the other hand, he is being dangled as bait into the dreadful dimensions.
> At least it's over quick...Bry was stuck under the Mansion for a long time.
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I'm sure we could bury Vizh somewhere. In fact if I ever get to another UT arc that's pretty much the starting point of "The Da Visinary Code".
> > On the bright side, Hatty gets to meet a new archvillain quite soon.
> My character may disagree with the "bright side" viewpoint.
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Possibly. Let's see.
By the way, do you still want Zdenka around? Feel free to e-mail me if you'd prefer.
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