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HH
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killer shrike

Subj: It took me quite a while to work out what this referred to, but I think I've corrected it now.
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 at 04:55:18 pm EDT
Reply Subj: Unless Dancer is borrowing a page from CSFB!'s playbook, you may want to go back and edit her conversation with Glory
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 at 04:05:53 pm EDT


> Interesting look into the aftermath. Misters Flay and Skinner were intriguing: servants of the Carnifex, perhaps?

We'll see.

> It was ironic that you had Epitome mention veterans wounded in the War, as I had plans for such a plot point later down the line.

I was trying to work out how each of the LL would react in terms of follow-up. I decided that:

Hatty - compensates by lots of "in your face" hero stuff
CSFB! - plenty of person-to-person with the remaining heroes
Epitome - attention to detail in the follow up procedurals
Yuki - heavy emphasis on the crimefighting action adventure
Al B - major fixing things spree
Vizh - concern for the missing members

And so on.