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Subj: Much-anticipated Writer's Notes!
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 at 01:03:54 am EDT (Viewed 403 times)
Reply Subj: Adventures in Parodyverse - The Pink Empire Part 2 (deleted - please read within)
Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 at 01:29:03 pm EDT (Viewed 411 times)

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This story was originally supposed to be a 3-parter.  Unfortunately, as much as I wanted to try and save it, it looks like the entire thing is flawed.  Part 2 is now removed, and Part 1 will be deleted separately.  I don't think there's any way I can salvage it aside from a complete rewrite from Part 1, and I have no clue how to approach the core story now.  So as far as I can tell at this point, the whole story and its core concept are no longer salvageable and are dead.

I started writing it two Untold Tales ago.  That means even if I manage to find inspiration it's going to take me a couple more weeks to catch up now.  I'm sorry to say that I'll have nothing to post until then besides one lone World Class chapter.  Which is not nearly as popular, but it's all I have right now.

On a personal note it's both depressing and discouraging.  Yes, I know it's my own fault, and that's exactly why it awakens doubts about my ability to write in a shared environment, or at all for that matter.  

Maybe I don't have the rhythm or understanding to do it anymore, or maybe I should expand my own cast and concentrate on that and the occasional tie-ins (which admittedly aren't doing too well either).  I like writing, but when things don't go smoothly I have to wonder if I've "lost the touch" and I'm just stretching to avoid going idle.  Maybe I like what I write because of the human tendency to prefer your own work out of pride even if it's drastically inferior.  

I'll still be around, but I'm not sure how much or if I'll be writing, depending on whether I can find the inspiration and cast to work with.

P.S.  I'm leaving this here for commentary for a couple of days before I remove the thread entirely.


As you might have noticed this chapter takes a bit of a risk with Akiko Masamune.  It's not easy to tell, but there is a part 3 to this story - she doesn't just vanish to the Safe when part 2 comes to an end.

The point of the overall story is to end the Psychic Samurai's dependence on her criminal underworld connections.  It's one of those situations where they've served her well so far but you knew sooner or later there would be a conflict.  Well here it is.

A secondary point is that after Hatman took down the Lynchpin and the streets were left in disarray by that, and by the Parody War, there's a lot of opportunity for crime families.  The best spoils go to the most aggressive, and there are new players like the Zoot Suit Gang gaining fast.  It can be supposed, then, that Akiko has had to become more aggressive to protect her territory and expand.  And while she's friends with the Psychic Samurai, Chiaki's association with the Lair Legion makes her less than reliable for help.

Meanwhile though because the reaction to Part 1 seemed to be neutral, and Part 2 negative so far, I'm going to be watching for further opinions.  If it's turned off too many readers, and I get the overwhelming impression that nobody cares what part 3 is like after reading part 2, I may scrap part 3 and consider removing part 1 and 2 as well.  If I do that it'll be the first time I've ever had to axe an entire multi-part story, and I hope it's the last time I have to.

I guess this goes back to a problem I talked to Ian about in a reply thread once - that I have a very small personal cast, and whenever I write a multi-part story it usually involves outside characters.  If that becomes increasingly hazardous (either because I take too many risks or because other characters become too wrapped in other stories) I may have to avoid writing anything "integrated" for a while until I can come up with my own complete cast first.