So... I'm stumbling. I've had a good run with the first chapter of my book. However, as I start the second chapter, I'm considering revising the whole chapter. As it stands now, the chapter I have written adds something into the storyline that I'm not sure fits.

In essence, what I'm asking for is for a volunteer reader to read both versions of Chapter 2 and get back to me on it. I am going to type what I have written, and in a couple of weeks I should have the second version.

Please let me know if you have experience in this area and if you'd be willing to lend an ear! Thanks!

Your long forgotten friend,
-Spaztic Chyld