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So, I was right in thinking of dreams.

Indeed.

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I did laugh at the line HB said when he woke up. His "love life" will be a subplot in future issues of his own series.

Excellent.

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I wouldn't mind seeing more interaction/team-ups between Ham-Boy & Alcheman they work well together.

They're two of the more natural team players.

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As for an evaluation of how Ham-Boy did in the story:
- Use of the powers: adequate.

With a couple of special mentions for innovative uses.

- Teamwork: adequate given that he had not worked with many of those involved before.

He didn't actually stab anyone, which puts him up on others in the group.

- Initiative: adequate given the situation he found himself in.

CSFB! is going to mark him down for not "nailing the princesses".

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He could develop his inner-monologue more but all in all this outing was adequate. I'd give it a solid B, a good showing but there is room for improvement.

Sounds good.

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Untold Tales of the Lair Legion #348: The Core, or Deepest Down - Complete · The Hooded Hood thanks his daughter for the lunch and the laundry. Here's the damn story, okay? · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 09:54:48 am EDT
- I should have guessed where all the subplots were headed, given the specific power ... (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Oct 13, 2010 at 04:01:41 am EDT
  - I specially arranged so that CSFB! isn't around when the rest discuss this so they can have a one-to-one meeting later. (no text) · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 08:53:49 am EDT
- And deep it is. · Al B. Harper · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 09:29:42 am EDT
  - Re: And deep it is. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 10:19:09 am EDT
- Reply to part 4... · L! · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 03:09:51 pm EDT
  - Re: Reply to part 4... · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:38:29 am EDT
- Part four reply. · Rhiannon · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 11:00:26 am EDT
  - Re: Part four reply. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:12:37 am EDT
- Those people will never want to see a S'more again. · Visionary · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 10:36:10 am EDT
  - Or sushi. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:14:52 am EDT
    - The grades... · Visionary · Tue Oct 12, 2010 at 10:38:00 am EDT
      - Re: The grades... · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 08:59:07 am EDT
- It's one of those "that can't be good" moments. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 10:25:48 am EDT
  - Which one? · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:10:50 am EDT
    - Pick any. · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 09:15:48 am EDT
      - Option F · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 08:51:41 am EDT
        
        Re: Option F · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 11:15:45 pm EDT
- Will the grading be norm or criterion reference based? (no text) · killer shrike gives the story a strong A, regardless · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 09:10:29 am EDT
  - I think that would be up to the individual person or Shoggoth. (no text) · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 04:58:04 am EDT
- Part 3 reply. · Rhiannon · Fri Oct 08, 2010 at 03:07:58 am EDT
  - Re: Part 3 reply. · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:15:15 am EDT
- Hatty sure does get shot a lot. · Visionary · Fri Oct 08, 2010 at 01:08:43 am EDT
  - Maybe it's him? · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:18:48 am EDT
- That must have been very cathartic for young Vincent (no text) · killer shrike · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 05:46:03 pm EDT
  - You can be sure he'll beat himself up about it later. (no text) · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:14:34 am EDT
- Hmmmm.... · L! · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 03:34:55 pm EDT
  - Hmmmm....? · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:10:39 am EDT
- Third part - the game! · Anime Jason · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 09:20:30 am EDT
  - Re: Third part - the game! · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 06:31:23 am EDT
    - Re: Third part - the game! · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 09:58:22 am EDT
      - Re: Third part - the game! · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 10:20:21 am EDT
        
        Re: Third part - the game! · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 12:38:29 pm EDT
        
        Re: Third part - the game! · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 08:59:48 am EDT
- Part 2 reply. · Rhiannon · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 03:31:21 am EDT
  - Re: Part 2 reply. · HH · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 02:10:26 pm EDT
- At the foot of part two... · Anime Jason · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:11:06 pm EDT
  - On the lower shelves. · HH · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:42:43 pm EDT
    - Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 09:11:57 pm EDT
      - Re: On the lower shelves. · HH · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 02:13:18 pm EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 07:28:58 pm EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · HH · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 05:32:33 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 08:46:00 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:09:39 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 09:55:57 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 10:25:48 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 12:36:07 pm EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 09:02:11 am EDT
        
        Re: On the lower shelves. · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 11:03:29 pm EDT
- Sally's got some 'splainin to do · killer shrike doesn't think a flow chart will help her though · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 07:35:39 pm EDT
  - "There's very little that can't be helped by a flow chart" - Miss F. · HH · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:11:48 pm EDT
- Some peculiar goings ons down below... · Visionary · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 07:25:08 pm EDT
  - * Insert double entendre here * · HH · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:16:48 pm EDT
    - Be sure to use protection. · Visionary · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 04:51:21 pm EDT
      - Oo-err! · HH · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 05:30:01 am EDT
- "Diving inside a tub of maggots tossed inside a spin dryer"? You do have a way with a phrase. (no text) · killer shrike enjoyed this part and is looking forward to future parts. · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 03:56:42 pm EDT
  - But who hasn't done that in his time? (no text) · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 05:46:00 pm EDT
- Interesting. · L! · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 03:43:06 pm EDT
  - Two nubile princesses for the price of one. · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 05:48:34 pm EDT
    - So, it's a "Buy 1, get 1 free" sort of thing? · L! · Sun Oct 03, 2010 at 08:59:45 pm EDT
      - Ell, maybe rescue one get one free. · HH thinks only villains are allowed to buy princesses · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 02:21:03 pm EDT
- So I should hold off on cleaning out their lockers? · Visionary · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 01:18:09 pm EDT
  - You have people to do that for you now. Especially Flapjack's locker. · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 01:44:34 pm EDT
- They're really more "within" than "deep down" at this point. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 12:51:17 pm EDT
  - I didn't say what they were deep down in. · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 01:34:45 pm EDT
    - I stick by my original assessment. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 02:33:08 pm EDT
      - Actually, the title says they're at "the Core". · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 06:05:22 pm EDT
        
        That's false advertising. The Core is way too hot. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 08:33:32 pm EDT
        
        Not according to this diagram... · HH · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 02:27:29 pm EDT
        
        That diagram is not to scale. · Anime Jason · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:02:40 pm EDT
        
        What size do you think the hole in the Arctic should be? · HH · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:33:45 pm EDT
        
        Very small. · Anime Jason · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 07:59:49 pm EDT
        
        Size doesn't matter. · HH · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 05:42:12 am EDT
        
        It might keep the seals from falling in, though. · Anime Jason · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 08:41:21 am EDT
        
        Seals invented parachutes long ago. They just keep it secret. · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 06:48:40 am EDT
        
        They hide them in the snow? · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 09:49:34 am EDT
        
        You can't understimate them. It's fatal. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 10:35:17 am EDT
        
        Not if you have their approval. · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 12:27:52 pm EDT
        
        Re: Not if you have their approval. · HH · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 09:05:32 am EDT
        
        Re: Not if you have their approval. · Anime Jason · Sun Oct 17, 2010 at 11:07:37 pm EDT
- Part 1 reply. · Rhiannon · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 11:08:37 am EDT
  - I'm glad the reply wasn't unpert. · HH · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 12:07:48 pm EDT