Quote: An excellent camping adventure, with lessons learned (or maybe not learned, as some major questions remain, but lessons were certainly applied thoroughly) and bonding achieved (except where new animosities were formed.)
There's a whole new bit of Parody-Earth to revisit sometime too.
Quote: Okay, so maybe it wasn't *entirely* a successful team-building retreat, but it was damn entertaining. I'll have to come back later to score the participants... I always was late in grading assignments.
Proceed.
Quote: Thugos is assembling quite the pantheon up there. That's going to be bad news for someone... hopefully the next LL leader. That Ham-boy has potential... maybe I can get him to sign the right documents...
More on this stuff as soon as I get round to writing some more Untold Tale.
Quote: All in all, a rousing conclusion to a fun, pulpy adventure. I'm quite eager to see the fall out, and to finally establish the new team together. Hopefully readership will pick up this weekend and this entry will get the attention it deserves.
The next chapter actually follows on with the newbies arriving back on Parody Island.
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- Untold Tales of the Lair Legion #348: The Core, or Deepest Down - Complete · The Hooded Hood thanks his daughter for the lunch and the laundry. Here's the damn story, okay? · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 09:54:48 am EDT
- I should have guessed where all the subplots were headed, given the specific power ... (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Oct 13, 2010 at 04:01:41 am EDT
- And deep it is. · Al B. Harper · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 09:29:42 am EDT
- Reply to part 4... · L! · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 03:09:51 pm EDT
- Part four reply. · Rhiannon · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 11:00:26 am EDT
- Those people will never want to see a S'more again. · Visionary · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 10:36:10 am EDT
- Or sushi. · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:14:52 am EDT
- It's one of those "that can't be good" moments. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 10:25:48 am EDT
- Which one? · HH · Sun Oct 10, 2010 at 05:10:50 am EDT
- Will the grading be norm or criterion reference based? (no text) · killer shrike gives the story a strong A, regardless · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 09:10:29 am EDT
- Part 3 reply. · Rhiannon · Fri Oct 08, 2010 at 03:07:58 am EDT
- Hatty sure does get shot a lot. · Visionary · Fri Oct 08, 2010 at 01:08:43 am EDT
- That must have been very cathartic for young Vincent (no text) · killer shrike · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 05:46:03 pm EDT
- Hmmmm.... · L! · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 03:34:55 pm EDT
- Hmmmm....? · HH · Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 07:10:39 am EDT
- Third part - the game! · Anime Jason · Thu Oct 07, 2010 at 09:20:30 am EDT
- Part 2 reply. · Rhiannon · Wed Oct 06, 2010 at 03:31:21 am EDT
- At the foot of part two... · Anime Jason · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 08:11:06 pm EDT
- Sally's got some 'splainin to do · killer shrike doesn't think a flow chart will help her though · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 07:35:39 pm EDT
- Some peculiar goings ons down below... · Visionary · Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 07:25:08 pm EDT
- "Diving inside a tub of maggots tossed inside a spin dryer"? You do have a way with a phrase. (no text) · killer shrike enjoyed this part and is looking forward to future parts. · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 03:56:42 pm EDT
- Interesting. · L! · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 03:43:06 pm EDT
- So I should hold off on cleaning out their lockers? · Visionary · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 01:18:09 pm EDT
- They're really more "within" than "deep down" at this point. · Anime Jason · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 12:51:17 pm EDT
- Part 1 reply. · Rhiannon · Sat Oct 02, 2010 at 11:08:37 am EDT
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