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Reply Subj: And Lo, there came a day... Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 at 06:55:41 pm EDT (Viewed 510 times) | |||||||
Quote: ...where a bunch of sour-dispositioned criminals had their arms twisted...Gently prodded, I'd like to think... Quote: Excellent job of bringing the characters together and forging a new purpose, free (well, largely I'm guessing) of manipulation and deceit! Luckily, GE was free to hop in there at the last second before the "good" members of the team made things bad for themselves by fighting their way out of the corner they were backed into. I think you did an excellent job of playing the assorted personalities off of each other as they learned the truth and figured out what it meant for each of them personally.Part of my motivation for writing Chapter 7 the way I did was I wasn't sure how to extricate the team from the mess they were in at the end of Chapter 6. The very obvious answer finally struck me. Quote: Interesting set up for the leadership as well, with Hatty as a mandatory adviser and GE in charge with ks as deputy. It should certainly make for some interesting debates around the A shaped table...I was going to remove Hatman from team leadership all together, but as the set up unfolded that wasn't going to work. Hatman won't be appearing very often in this title, but it was a necessary step to set the line-up the way I wanted. Quote: So they've put a version of Glitch's brain into a version of Pelopia's body, making some kind of Frankenstein combination of order and chaos? I'm sure that's not being done for pure research reasons, so I'll be curious to see the ultimate goal. Not to mention what she's called. (Pelopyitch? Glitopia? Susan?)I don't actually have a name worked up yet, but I do have another ingredient or so to add to the mix before the new entity makes its debut. Quote: Fun stuff! Glad you enjoyed it! ~Hat~ | |||||||
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