Tales of the Parodyverse

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Hatman

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Al B. Harper is impressed!

Subj: Excellent
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:17:50 am EDT (Viewed 343 times)

Reply Subj: Great stuff!
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 at 05:27:46 am EDT (Viewed 3 times)

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Fantastic - just when we think we know everything about this series you throw something like that at us!

It serves as a bit of a break for the reader from the main plot but also allows me to remind the reader about Doorman as well as shed some light on his motivations; so far we've just seen "Parodyverse rejecting me, hate Hatman".

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Wonderful insight, and excellent use of the first person.

I thought it would help show where Doorman was coming from.

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I give this the good old Al B. thumbs up!

But what did the Bus Load of Hobos think?

~Hat~

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The Abandoned Legion #7 · Hatman returns from a week-end camping trip and offers the next chapter · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:08:04 pm EDT
- It's always good to get inside the mind of the villain and it makes a nice narrative pause. Well done. (no text) · HH · Sat May 29, 2010 at 07:21:09 am EDT
  - Thanks. Hope I didn't contradict any past history in the Moderatorverse (no text) · Hatman · Mon May 31, 2010 at 11:17:13 am EDT
- A good origin story for a dark counterpart. It helps make him more sympathetic. (no text) · Nitz the Bloody · Wed May 26, 2010 at 01:36:47 am EDT
  - Don't let him fool you, he's still an evil bastard. (no text) · Hatman · Wed May 26, 2010 at 03:07:43 pm EDT
    - Nobody starts evil... · Nitz the Bloody · Wed May 26, 2010 at 07:53:34 pm EDT
      - I'm not sure about Ian... · Hatman · Wed May 26, 2010 at 11:04:50 pm EDT
- It's good to have goals in life. · Visionary · Tue May 25, 2010 at 09:55:11 am EDT
  - Focus is important · Hatman · Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:07:24 am EDT
- An excellent origin well told (no text) · killer shrike · Tue May 25, 2010 at 06:42:51 am EDT
  - Thanks! (no text) · Hatman · Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:07:46 am EDT
- Great stuff! · Al B. Harper is impressed! · Tue May 25, 2010 at 05:27:46 am EDT
  - Excellent · Hatman · Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:17:50 am EDT
- He definitely has some issues. (no text) · Anime Jason · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:29:08 pm EDT
  - I hope they're a little more clear now though (no text) · Hatman · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:41:42 pm EDT
- Deleted Scene · Hatman supposes this counts as a · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:12:10 pm EDT
  - I like the expanded personal flavor of the first person... · Visionary · Tue May 25, 2010 at 09:57:59 am EDT
    - As do I · Hatman · Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:19:53 am EDT
  - I'd say the first person certainly gave the actual chapter all the more power. (no text) · Al B. Harper still enjoyed reading this · Tue May 25, 2010 at 05:29:58 am EDT
    - It looks like I made the right decision from the feedback thus far (no text) · Hatman · Tue May 25, 2010 at 10:20:59 am EDT
  - It would have worked either way... · Anime Jason · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:29:54 pm EDT
    - Re: It would have worked either way... · Hatman · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:45:02 pm EDT