Tales of the Parodyverse - Better open a window

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I was especially affected by the loss of Tera. It speaks well of your writing that I care enough about her to be shocked at her sudden demise and to feel gut-punched by the twist.

I'm pretty sure I stole the trick of getting the reader invested in a character like that from you, so really it speaks well of your writing.

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So now the Abandoned Legion is outed. The LL are going to find pretty soon that there's a "Sersi" and a "Premiere" knocking about - and a fake Hatman again. Trouble will follow - and should.

And importantly, the Abandoned Legion is outed, "officially" linked to the Lair Legion, and responsible for the destruction and death in GMY. It's all a part of the plan.

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Proceed.

Proceeding. I think I'm going to maybe tie things a little looser to UT than I've been doing because I'm finding occassionaly that I've handcuffed myself (for example, I couldn't get G-eyed in because I set this story during his time in Faerie with Alcheman).

~Hat~

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The Abandoned Legion #6 · Hatman with an assist by JJJ · Sat May 15, 2010 at 07:18:56 pm EDT
- Effective use of alternating street-level perspectives and layered plotting on [spoiler]'s part. Sorry I couldn't contribute. :( (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat May 22, 2010 at 12:35:31 am EDT
  - No worries, we all get busy. Glad you liked it (no text) · Hatman · Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:25:17 pm EDT
- An uncommonly poignant look at civilian casualties in a superhero world. (no text) · Nitz the Bloody · Fri May 21, 2010 at 12:12:44 am EDT
  - There's a reason I love Astro City (no text) · Hatman · Fri May 21, 2010 at 01:28:20 pm EDT
- Talk about a double cross! · Al B. Harper · Mon May 17, 2010 at 01:36:00 am EDT
  - Maybe Tara needs her own tie-in issue, prior to the events of this chapter (no text) · Hatman · Mon May 17, 2010 at 10:02:05 am EDT
- That newspaper should have gone out of business years ago. · Anime Jason · Sat May 15, 2010 at 11:00:45 pm EDT
  - Sensationalism sells · Hatman · Mon May 17, 2010 at 10:01:22 am EDT
    - Re: Sensationalism sells · Anime Jason · Sat May 22, 2010 at 08:23:41 am EDT
- A truly outstanding chapter! · Visionary · Sat May 15, 2010 at 10:28:34 pm EDT
  - Any time JJJ contributes, it's bound to be good · Hatman · Sat May 15, 2010 at 10:36:43 pm EDT
- Some very potent stuff here · HH · Sat May 15, 2010 at 08:24:30 pm EDT
  - Better open a window · Hatman · Sat May 15, 2010 at 09:17:52 pm EDT
    - Re: Better open a window · HH · Sat May 22, 2010 at 07:51:49 am EDT
- *Blinks* "That sonuva-!" · killer shrike · Sat May 15, 2010 at 08:16:54 pm EDT
  - Thought that'd get your attention · Hatman · Sat May 15, 2010 at 09:15:00 pm EDT
    - Re: Thought that'd get your attention · Anime Jason · Sat May 15, 2010 at 11:02:31 pm EDT