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Quote: As long as we see there can be drawbacks to Mumph's style of "liasing", I don't really think this is a problem. Actually, the idea of there being some contrast between how Vizh runs the team and how Mumph would, maybe leading to some friction, would be interesting.
Quote: Definitely agree here. This is a great opportunity to contrast the strengths and weaknesses of both characters. Add in Asil feeling conflicted if there is friction between the two and I think there is some excellent story potential here.
I suppose that might grow naturally from the stories as they unfold - characters do write themselves sometimes - but it's not something I'm too excited about including. For the most part I think Mumph will be happy to sit by the fire with his Times crossword, complaining about the cricket.
This might be a good time to mention some of my thinking about the new team and their adventures. The line-up is one of the largest we've seen. I don't expect to use every character in every story, or equally. I'd like to stay away from the "everybody pile on" massive end-of-the-world stuff for a while and concentrate on other plots (we'll see how that goes).
I think character interaction, including tension and disagreement, are part of the fun of team books. I expect the new line-up to come with some of that built in. But I think that stuff works best against a background of cameraderie, respect, and affection. Some comics readers clearly want to read about teams full of heroes who are arseholes but I don't want to write them.
I suspect that the way to use the new, larger team will be to send them out on missions in sub-groups. The subset that would get fielded for a mystical incursion would be different from that dealing with an undercover gangbusting case or that handling the theft of alien technology. In the first proper story of the new line-up I expect to send all the newbies on an exploration mission with their training officer, leaving the old hands to deal with something else entirely at home.
Quote: I am delighted to see Mumphrey back in the cast, so I hope that after reflection you keep him around. And why shouldn't your primary characters look good too? Everyone pimps their main character out in their stories (other than maybe Vizh), no reason that yours shouldn't have some great showings too.
I'm happy to promote Mumph in Mumphrey stories, but Untold Tales has generally been a different kind of vehicle that tries to give equal time to everybody's characters. It's hard for the writer to judge the right levels of interaction when his own character is involved.
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- #344: Untold Tales of the Lair Legion: Candidates Parts One to Four: Romance and Profanity · The Hooded Hood reveals the newest line-up of the Lair Legion... slowly · Fri May 07, 2010 at 03:35:04 pm EDT
- Alcheman is so wonderfully forthright. We've been missing a straight man. :) [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat May 22, 2010 at 12:02:49 am EDT
- And then there were four · Al B. Harper · Mon May 17, 2010 at 01:28:54 am EDT
- At least. · HH · Sat May 22, 2010 at 07:42:43 am EDT
- That invitation came in just the nick of time · killer shrike isn't sure what to make of Wild Angelica's invite.... · Sat May 15, 2010 at 05:53:05 pm EDT
- Romance and Profanity...good thing it wasn't the other way around. · Anime Jason · Sat May 15, 2010 at 04:06:53 pm EDT
- Nice work... · L! · Sat May 15, 2010 at 12:26:42 pm EDT
- I enjoyed this. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat May 15, 2010 at 11:35:36 am EDT
- I wish chick flicks had this kind of romance in it...with explosions · Hatman · Sat May 15, 2010 at 09:59:15 am EDT
- A bit light on the romance side of things... · Visionary · Sat May 15, 2010 at 08:54:58 am EDT
- This is good. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu May 13, 2010 at 11:10:51 am EDT
- Nothing like head trauma to break an awkward point in the conversation · Hatman · Wed May 12, 2010 at 03:56:15 pm EDT
- Part 3 Comments · Anime Jason · Wed May 12, 2010 at 03:31:21 pm EDT
- Good to see [spoiler leader] settling in and [spoiler assistant] being brought on board the support staff ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed May 12, 2010 at 12:53:02 am EDT
- See? I barely have the job back, and everything comes crashing down. (no text) · Visionary admires the suddenness of the apocalypse, but notes that "The Sopranos" beat you to this ending. · Tue May 11, 2010 at 11:01:49 pm EDT
- I think part of Part 3 got chopped off. (no text) · killer shrike liked what he read of it though · Tue May 11, 2010 at 07:58:48 pm EDT
- Nice · Al B. Harper · Tue May 11, 2010 at 07:42:15 pm EDT
- Really? · HH · Tue May 11, 2010 at 11:27:58 pm EDT
- Effectively ominous setup for [spoiler villain] and credible recruitment of [spoiler heroes] onto the team. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue May 11, 2010 at 06:02:56 pm EDT
- This is amazing. Sorry I didn't read it sooner. (no text) · Rhiannon · Tue May 11, 2010 at 10:57:58 am EDT
- I've got some mice in my garage Donar can smite if he's still in the mood · Hatman · Mon May 10, 2010 at 01:15:28 pm EDT
- Hmmm.... · L! · Sun May 09, 2010 at 04:05:12 pm EDT
- Widening Reply... · Anime Jason · Sun May 09, 2010 at 01:06:37 pm EDT
- I like how the last few lines encourage a re-read with a new mental image. · Visionary · Sun May 09, 2010 at 12:31:36 pm EDT
- Good stuff (no text) · killer shrike · Sun May 09, 2010 at 09:12:45 am EDT
- Sweet! Glad to see SPOILER again. But we're still no clearer on the new lineup.... (no text) · Al B. Harper has always been a fan · Sat May 08, 2010 at 11:32:35 pm EDT
- Nice. Very Nice. · L! · Fri May 07, 2010 at 09:19:31 pm EDT
- That was better than CSFB!'s first speech at least. · Anime Jason · Fri May 07, 2010 at 07:54:27 pm EDT
- Well-executed, and an interesting way of making [spoiler government character] look like a good guy for a change. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri May 07, 2010 at 07:42:07 pm EDT
- I didn't expect (spoiler) to be on the roster · killer shrike · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:35:37 pm EDT
- I think I handled that well. · Visionary · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:16:01 pm EDT
- Brilliant like always. · Rhiannon · Fri May 07, 2010 at 05:02:54 pm EDT
- One down... · Hatman · Fri May 07, 2010 at 04:36:46 pm EDT
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