- Aella 9, - Refuge · Rhiannon · Mon Mar 01, 2010 at 06:56:39 pm EST
- Nice twist, an unexpected location, but one that fits for her to find herself in. Well done. (no text) · Al B. Harper · Sat Mar 06, 2010 at 11:18:57 pm EST
- If anyone's interested... · Rhiannon · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:25:03 pm EST
- Glad to see her evolving and taking ownership of her own life. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 01:19:21 am EST
- Molly gives good advice. Another excellent chapter. (no text) · killer shrike · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 05:07:17 pm EST
- I hoped something like that would happen sooner or later. (no text) · Anime Jason · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 02:55:57 pm EST
- Good second draft, correcting the errors and omissions of the first while retaining the emotion. Well done. · HH is a tough father to have if you're an aspiring writer · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 12:20:02 pm EST
- Thatta girl · Hatman · Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 11:01:15 am EST
- Hooray for Aella... · Visionary · Mon Mar 01, 2010 at 08:44:16 pm EST
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