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...Although they may want to shower first, or the smell is likely to be punishing to the other passengers on Space Mountain.
A fun take on the two-team scavenger hunt story, and an interesting division of the LL team. I'm not 100% sure what Vizh and a snowman can do against the kinds of baddies that the WNC may russle up, but they both know how to roll with the punches, as it were. Plus, there's always a cabbie for back-up.
Here's hoping Nats gets stuck with the job... the set up is a lot of fun, and I won't mind seeing him suffer through it some more.
Crapsack returns, as disgusting as ever. I'm glad Vizh's team didn't draw that contest... lord only knows how long it'd take to get that color out of Icy. Hatty and Dream always make a classic pairing, and this outing lived up to the others. I'd say any fears of being overly rusty were unfounded.
Looking forward to more!
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> ...Although they may want to shower first, or the smell is likely to be punishing to the other passengers on Space Mountain.
It's all part of the experience.
> A fun take on the two-team scavenger hunt story, and an interesting division of the LL team.
I'm struggling with the lack of an abrasive Trickshot/Epitome/CV type. I was a bit uncomfortable dumping Al B. with the sarky remarks in section 1.
> I'm not 100% sure what Vizh and a snowman can do against the kinds of baddies that the WNC may russle up, but they both know how to roll with the punches, as it were. Plus, there's always a cabbie for back-up.
Well, Vizh gets to face a different kind of problem and an old enemy from his rogues gallery.
> Here's hoping Nats gets stuck with the job... the set up is a lot of fun, and I won't mind seeing him suffer through it some more.
This series of stories was going to be a lot more Nats-centric but I don't think Bill's reading it so I've shifted the focus.
> Crapsack returns, as disgusting as ever. I'm glad Vizh's team didn't draw that contest... lord only knows how long it'd take to get that color out of Icy. Hatty and Dream always make a classic pairing, and this outing lived up to the others.
I've been meaning to remind people about Crapsack and establish his power level for some time. That boy could be a problem later on. he's got roughly the abilities and range of Moore's Swamp Thing but based on garbage - and humans keep on making more of the stuff.
> I'd say any fears of being overly rusty were unfounded.
I'm not as convinced as you are. I'm particularly unsure if I've got the discipline to commit to regularly writing a PV story.
> Looking forward to more!
I'll do my best.
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- #331: Yet More Untold Tales of Ghost Taxis: Fare Play (complete) · The Hooded Hood checks to see if he can still write this stuff · Mon Apr 06, 2009 at 04:48:46 pm EDT
- Nice job of working *spoiler* into things! · Visionary · Fri Apr 10, 2009 at 06:08:16 pm EDT
- Hey! [spoiler] is back! And nice tie-backs to some classic Untold Tales. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 10:36:35 pm EDT
- I love it when Al B. sprouts science geek-speak. · Al B. Harper · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 09:05:12 pm EDT
- Yuki is going to hurt him a lot. · Anime Jason · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 09:00:23 pm EDT
- That's going to leave a bad you know what in you know who's you know where · killer shrike · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 07:59:25 pm EDT
- Inevitably · HH · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 08:26:31 pm EDT
- Well this promises to be explosive. (no text) · Rhiannon · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 07:34:42 pm EDT
- Jason, could you arrange for this story to still be editable so I can put in the next section? · HH · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 01:18:57 pm EDT
- Let's hope Icy never loses his pure outlook · Al B. Harper · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 07:28:50 am EDT
- (By the way, just sent you my e-mail reply again. I think your spam filter might be eating my e-mails again.) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Apr 09, 2009 at 04:04:32 am EDT
- This is what the place had been missing. · L! · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 10:50:16 pm EDT
- Icy brings a welcome ray of sunshine that's been missing since Yo. ;) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 05:03:42 pm EDT
- Next time she may want to invest in reticulated iris and hellebore · killer shrike · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 04:23:27 pm EDT
- They won't be getting any gardening awards. · Anime Jason · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 01:44:59 pm EDT
- Oh good... I was worried I hadn't angered enough cosmic types recently. (no text) · Visionary will comment more thoroughly after work. · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 11:13:56 am EDT
- I hope Icy doesn't learn the definition of a trollop; it would shatter his world. (no text) · Jack · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 11:01:44 am EDT
- That was interesting. (no text) · Rhiannon · Wed Apr 08, 2009 at 09:56:58 am EDT
- Part 2 comments [Spoilers] · Al B. Haper · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 11:19:41 pm EDT
- Ghost Taxis #331: "Meanwhile, back at the warehouse..." · Anime Jason · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 10:00:30 pm EDT
- Should have visited Disney World while they were there. · Visionary · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 09:45:50 pm EDT
- Pt.2 It's sad to see robots used for evil rather than good :( (no text) · Jack · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 07:33:52 pm EDT
- Excellent fight scene choreography and character interaction. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 07:12:13 pm EDT
- Part 2, all trash all the time. · Anime Jason · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 06:22:05 pm EDT
- Good riddance to bad rubbish. · HH has written two things today, this chapter and a court deposition re custody. This one was more fun. · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 08:20:23 pm EDT
- Oh, s*** · killer shrike · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 04:47:29 pm EDT
- Well, it is nice to see the standard method of dealing with a dilemma still in place... (no text) · Manga Shoggoth · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 04:35:21 pm EDT
- This is brilliant, I'm really enjoying the daily bit. (no text) · Rhiannon · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 04:22:28 pm EDT
- Ah! A pleasant surprise! Of course, all adventures are before the killing and maiming starts... (no text) · Visionary will comment fully after work. · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 11:33:42 am EDT
- Shouldn't that be the rules and everything else debate? · Rhiannon · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 11:01:07 am EDT
- Al B. Harper Chapter 20: Family Ties (a tie in to UTT #331) · Al B. Harper welcomes IW back to the board with this tie-in · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 08:28:06 am EDT
- Excellent return to form. :) [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Apr 07, 2009 at 03:46:44 am EDT
- Looks like you can! · Anime Jason · Mon Apr 06, 2009 at 07:55:04 pm EDT
- That sounds like Icy... I hope they collect a sufficient amount of maguffins of doom :) (no text) · Jack · Mon Apr 06, 2009 at 07:28:47 pm EDT
- You're getting there, but I suggest a few more dozen stories to make sure. · killer shrike · Mon Apr 06, 2009 at 06:45:37 pm EDT
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