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Anime Jason 
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Subj: Have you ever tried cooking pigeons?Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 at 03:52:24 am EDT (Viewed 491 times)
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 at 09:15:52 pm EDT (Viewed 484 times) |
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> > Hard to judge this one - or two - since they're obviously a stage in an ongoing drama, not a resting point. Bonus points for emotional content. I always like to see the protagonists getting put through the wringer.
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> It gets logistically better for Chiaki, but emotionally worse. Much worse.
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> > As others have noted, Masamune and Graham are usually a little subtler and sharper than events here might indicate. I almost wonder if they didn't have some kind of under-the-table quid pro quo deal happening in the background; some third party villain might be going down big because of this. Frankie might have brokered the deal.
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> In a sense, though he's not directly mentioned. There was, however, a clue in how annoyed Akiko was that her campaign contributions are worthless.
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> > I sense Chiaki's troubles are only just beginning.
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> Yes.
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 Adventures in Parodyverse - Saving the Future Part 28.2 & 28.3 (risky double sized chapter) · Anime Jason hopes this doesn't cause too much trouble...or too much eye strain · Sat Sep 27, 2008 at 11:58:40 am EDT
- Chez Louis is okay, but they tend to overcook the crepes. (no text) · Dancer · Fri Oct 10, 2008 at 04:29:29 am EDT
- This could spin off in all sorts of directions. · dull thud · Mon Sep 29, 2008 at 02:42:11 pm EDT
- It's full of drama · Al B. Harper · Sun Sep 28, 2008 at 09:50:29 pm EDT
- Okay, that put a sabre-toothed tiger amongst the pigeons. · HH · Sun Sep 28, 2008 at 04:18:57 pm EDT
- Dream's thoughts on this would echo my own ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! offers his edited thoughts, to sound like less of a dismissive, confrontational douche · Sun Sep 28, 2008 at 02:37:58 am EDT
- Yeah, this one could cause some trouble... ;-) · Visionary · Sun Sep 28, 2008 at 12:53:36 am EDT
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