Now, this is the sort of thing I like to see on a monday morning. Especially when there is a network outage and I can't do any work (seperate networks...).
> “The Legion never got onto Galactivac’s hoover-ship,†Glory reported. “Nobody ever has, as far as we know.â€Â
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Not true. At some point two legionaires were on board (DK and AG, I think - around the World Tour). Mind you, they were strapped to a dissecting table so I doubt whether they got much sightseeing in.
> There was a greater ripple on the surface of the vacuum-ship and a large chunky humanoid with bulldozer jaws teleported into existence.
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> “A Chomper!†Visionary recognised. “They’re kind of like Galactivac’s guard dogs.â€Â
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Visions of one of the ABC Warriors (Ro-Jaws, I think).
> “Well, Yo named them,†Vizh apologised. “He wanted to call them Cutie-jaws but Jarvis vetoed that.â€Â
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See above.
> Vaahir of Viigo is Caph’s greatest warlord, Prince Kiivan’s mentor and right-hand man in retaking Caph. Vaahir’s passion for the Lady Kaara of Jaaxa is celebrated in song and story.
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And, on one occasion, in a tent in Lemuria.
> Lord Troovis of Troovis survived the reign of Prince Aarmis by being alternately stupid, subservient, absent, and stupid. He sees a future for himself in politics.
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He's the Tony Blair of the Caphan People?
As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment.
I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.
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 #328: Untold Tales of the Parodyverse: On The Unwelcome Attentions of the Living Death that Sucks - Complete · The Hooded Hood finishes the Caphan subplots and sets some new things in motion · Sat Jun 28, 2008 at 09:38:44 am EDT
- And the players continue to rearrange themselves into interesting patterns ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 11:32:37 pm EDT
- You old softy. · Visionary · Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 12:24:09 pm EDT
- That was lucky for her. · Anime Jason
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- And they all lived happily ever after. Again. (no text) · killer shrike · Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 10:19:04 am EDT
- That was a good ending. Next? (no text) · Rhiannon · Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 10:07:38 am EDT
- As if his last apprenticeship wasn't bad enough... · Visionary · Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 07:44:29 pm EDT
- An excellent group strategy. I especially loved Glitch's contribution. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 06:55:28 pm EDT
- At least he's outside. · Anime Jason · Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 03:55:16 pm EDT
- That was unexpected. (no text) · Rhiannon · Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 01:46:52 pm EDT
- Bit by bit, he's making it that much harder for his opposition to retain any support. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 05:35:31 pm EDT
- This was interesting (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 02:21:12 pm EDT
- You just had to draw it out a little longer, didn't you? · Visionary · Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 11:50:13 am EDT
- Of course. · HH · Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 01:52:14 pm EDT
- That solved one third of the problems. · Anime Jason · Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 09:26:58 am EDT
- Another fine chapter (no text) · killer shrike · Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 07:54:32 am EDT
- Every cliffhanger except for an imminent regeneration is here! ;) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 06:45:02 pm EDT
- Sucks for them · killer shrike · Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 11:20:32 am EDT
- Who doesn't enjoy some light conversation before dinner? · Visionary · Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 10:48:10 am EDT
- And then? · Rhiannon · Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 10:33:17 am EDT
- The fourth part... · Anime Jason · Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 09:16:56 am EDT
- I'm convinced I replied to part 3... Oh well, just blame it on hardware problems (today it's the turn of the air conditioning. Apparantly it is "being maintained"). · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Jul 03, 2008 at 07:03:25 am EDT
- I have to say, it's pretty incredible that this little universe of ours has expanded so much that such a gripping and full tale can be sustained by non-poster charac ... (no text) · spiffy has a tear in his eye · Thu Jul 03, 2008 at 12:50:32 am EDT
- I think someone's in for a hands-on lesson in feminism in action ... (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 11:19:48 pm EDT
- Obviously, people are telling me that I need to go away for the weekend more often. · Visionary · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 03:47:36 pm EDT
- This is interesting. (no text) · Rhiannon · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 02:23:10 pm EDT
- That makes me wonder... · Anime Jason · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 01:43:27 pm EDT
- Its been so long I'd forgotten that particular plot point (no text) · killer shrike · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 01:14:48 pm EDT
- A tale of a fateful trip... · Anime Jason · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 08:54:21 am EDT
- Have I made any "power vacuum" puns yet? · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Jun 30, 2008 at 08:11:43 am EDT
- An inventive and deceptive solution. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sun Jun 29, 2008 at 03:29:10 pm EDT
- Clever. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sun Jun 29, 2008 at 12:06:06 pm EDT
- Impressive (no text) · killer shrike · Sun Jun 29, 2008 at 09:44:25 am EDT
- I approve of Kiivan's methods of ending that particular conversation. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Jun 28, 2008 at 08:24:41 pm EDT
- Does he come with a blinds attachment? [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Sat Jun 28, 2008 at 12:14:12 pm EDT
- Four plans? Hey, that's four more than usual! (no text) · killer shrike · Sat Jun 28, 2008 at 11:28:37 am EDT
- This was a suprise. And a good story too. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat Jun 28, 2008 at 11:13:06 am EDT
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