> > I'm going to have a minor problem keeping Lara alive in a couple of chapter's time. I'll have to contrive a way for her not to be around to leap in to save lives at the cost of her own in an impossible situation.
> I have a few helpful hints for this:
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I still think, however, that if she saw someone about to be torn in pieces in front of her very eyes she'd dive from cover and risk herself to try and save them, even if that meant exposing herself to extreme danger, I don't think she's cold enough to just watch from cover as innocents are murdered thinking "now is not the time for me to intervene, what a shame."
Here we come up against one of the challenges of a shared universe multi-character round robin storyline. Given that situation, the options boil down to:
1. The hero does nothing - this damages the hero's "heroism standing" and may tarnish readers' views of the character.
2. The hero leaps in and somehow impossibly saves the day - but this robs the story of a fuller resolution, and may "steal" the resolution away from other heroes more involved in that particular bit of the narrative and more "deserving" of getting the win in this case (see Dr Strange arriving to solve all the problems in Avengers: Disassembled).
3. The hero leaps in and gets taken down so other heroes get the credit for solving the situation - this can sometimes punk the hero that tries and fails, showing them as ineffective and requiring another hero to pull their fat out of the fryer. It can be made to work, but it has to be done very carefully.
That's why in this case I'll probably go for my usual fourth solution: find a reason why the hero isn't there to be presented with that dilemma in the first place.
Even this comes with baggage. If the hero's not there just because he or she is at home with their feet up, or because they're not smart enough to know where they should be, those can also damage the character. But if the hero's off on a mission of their own, taking forward a different part of the storyline, then there's every reason they're not able to intervene and the problem goes away.
> Or that new alien race I added may have something for her to do at the time. Or maybe Lisa. Or she could be given a singular task that will leave her as a casual observer, or possibly in the dark, about what's going on.
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That's why I was wondering about Lara meeting the aliens. If she's embroiled in first contact then she'd definitely in Option 4. And I admit thatm of all the elements in the Saving the Future story so far, the aliens are the ones I haven't thought of a way to integrate yet.
> > On an entirely different topic, how's the Archive repair coming along?
> The Search has been fixed for a few days now, if that's what you mean. It had an obnoxious typo so it wasn't searching the dates correctly.
> If you mean links from your web site, the message numbers are now 2 digits longer. If you have a URL that ends with something like "rpy=parodyverse-20080615002456" just add "00" to the end. That's how the older message numbers were patched for the new system.
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That's going to be challenging for me to update on archived pages.
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- Saving the Future – Part 16: One Moment In Time - version 2 · The Hooded Hood addresses one of his longest-running subplots · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 09:15:12 am EDT
- The write was good and the rewrite was even better. (no text) · champagne · Mon Jun 16, 2008 at 06:35:59 pm EDT
- Very intriguing rewrites... · Nats · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 11:55:17 pm EDT
- Some clever and intriguing adjustments... · Visionary · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 10:36:33 pm EDT
- Comments version 2 · Anime Jason · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 04:39:22 pm EDT
- And this just makes even more complications. · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 12:19:13 pm EDT
- Nicely edited (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 09:43:55 am EDT
- On this. · HH · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 07:02:46 am EDT
- My thoughts · Scott · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 08:56:22 pm EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 04:27:19 am EDT
- Now, I'm quite fond of you. If you'd like to exchange your soul for certain success, let me know. (no text) · The Dainty Satan · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 01:36:36 am EDT
- Hey, I like you plenty. Of course, if you wanted to bribe me with some baked goods, I suppose I could like you more... · Visionary · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 12:08:22 am EDT
- Nobody hates you man · Hatman · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 11:17:20 pm EDT
- Has it really been that long? · L! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 09:25:30 pm EDT
- Why would we hate you for doing what you should be doing? · Nats · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 04:43:32 pm EDT
- I don't dislike you, and I don't think anyone else here does, either. Things happen. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 01:48:09 pm EDT
- One question: · killer shrike · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 07:17:38 am EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Anime Jason · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 12:33:39 am EDT
- Right then. Carry on. Sorry to be an oik or bounder or whatever. Just didn't want your well-written story to go to waste. (no text) · Nats · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:07:54 pm EDT
- I remember... · Anime Jason · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 09:51:12 am EDT
- I want the story back! (and the next one) · Anime Jason bring common sense...hopefully · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 01:33:50 am EDT
- If I say "Roni Y. Avis", does that mean people will stop asking me to finish "Happiness"? (no text) · Visionary's just happy he doesn't have to bribe other people to use his characters. · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:36:56 am EDT
- Response to the resent events. · L! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 10:50:55 pm EDT
- I'll second Nats' nomination of "Nick O'Time." This story is too good to remove. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 06:43:43 pm EDT
- Bah. · Nats · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:07:27 pm EDT
- This is ridiculous (no text) · killer shrike realizes he is the worst person to say this, given his past antics, but still..... · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:01:42 pm EDT
- Reserved Characters · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 04:03:16 pm EDT
- Aw dang. · Scott · Sun Jun 08, 2008 at 01:21:42 am EDT
- So, this is all just an elaborate scheme to get [spoiler] laid? (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! nonetheless enjoyed seeing both his characters and songs he recognized from his favorite decade · Sat Jun 07, 2008 at 12:31:08 am EDT
- Thank God for this. Now that poor subplot can stop the running. Or at least slow down to a jog, or perhaps a power walk. (no text) · Nats · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:08:59 pm EDT
- . (no text) · . · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 07:21:20 pm EDT
- Hmmm... and yet she doesn't seem the motherly type. · Visionary · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 07:08:15 pm EDT
- Interesting. Most Interesting. · L! · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:11:25 pm EDT
- Still? · HH · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:19:20 pm EDT
- I think the title is a song too. [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 12:25:42 pm EDT
- Interesting (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:21:31 am EDT
- Quite a surprising diversion (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:06:09 am EDT
- Oh... Crap. · Manga Shoggoth · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 10:26:08 am EDT
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