> I'll need to look at that sometime and see if I can't make the text alterations clearer. The whole of this chapter suffered from having to be recovered line by line from a dozen or more different cached versions after a computer crash scrambled the Word file, and from me deciding the split the chapter into three chapters for the sake of readers' sanity.
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I would have taken all 3 at once. Sanity is overrated.
> > And of course now I need to know if Anna is parked in the ducts of the helicarrier until I do some kind of tie in or if you're dealing with that part. She's going to really put her mechanical abstract brain to the test on this one, which is what I was hoping for. It's unacceptable to bring down the helicarrier and crash it, and it's also unacceptable to kill everyone and take control of it. She'll have to really be creative, like Yuki told her to do.
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> There's still all the rest of the material you sent me to use. It's all worked in, but with me splitting the story up into three daily chapters it's not all included in this first episode.
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> By the end of the three parts the helicarrier situation will be resolved and we can all move on to new crises.
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Noted (fortunately I was working on the board software and didn't have time to start any tie-ins yet).
> > It brought a smile to my face that it seems Yo is doing the same thing Faite did during the Moderator saga. Faite would probably be amused too.
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> Yo is slightly more contrained, in that people can only exit the Happy Place at the exact spot they entered it.
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That means the concept is still the same, though - hold on to more fragile people in trouble until someone less fragile comes along and cleans up the mess.
Of course Faite did it because she has a purpose in mind, not because she was trying to be friendly. Her point was that if all memory of the non-Moderator universe was erased, what was before could never be returned. She was preserving the memory through the small group she was looking after.
