> > > > And you were commenting on Lara Night being a danger to the Parodyverse. At least she's not creating multiple paradoxes which threaten to destroy all of existence in the universe.
> > > It's almost as if Liu Xi was being set up as the fall girl.
> > The fall girl for what though? If all existence ends there won't be anyone to object.
> > Though that might create an interesting conflict, since as of her talk with Chiaki, Lara believes she might be in the Parodyverse to prevent its destruction (ironically enough, since some believe she may cause it).
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> I expect we're talking long game here, anyhow. I know I'm playing one.
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I figured that. Lara has done a lot of thinking about why Shema sent her to the Parodyverse in the first place. But remember, even if Lara's purpose is to prevent its destruction, there are two ways that's possible: Lara could be a well-placed subtlety to gently tip the scales over time (something Shema excels at), or her maximum power could be needed. Or maybe both. Either way, another trademark of Shema's is that she never really gives all the info - or people don't learn anything along the way.
> I have an overall framework in mind for the Saving the Future series. I expect we're about 60% through it now. The Carnifex has already outlined some plans for after that. I expect there to be one more "major" test for our heroes and then the Carnifex will finally move out of the shadows.
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Noted.
> > From Liu Xi's point of view, that won't matter if she believes he's going to kill her, or get her killed, somehow.
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> This will really hark back to our previous conversation about Liu Xi evolving and doing and being things she's not been before. I expect she'll face quite a lot of emotional and physical trauma before she gets to her "pay off" scenes with the Void Scholar.
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Liu Xi is well aware that her previous patterns weren't terribly successful, so she would definitely be looking for something different.
> > It's sounding like Liu Xi will probably have to be saved...again. Just when she might have been the world's savior.
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> I does sound like that, doesn't it? But actually that would be a narrative weakness. The real job is to get people thinking "How the hell does she get out of that? How can anybody save her now?" and then give her her moment. As I say, that'll be a while yet.
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Not really a narrative weakness, just the sudden turnaround in status. At first it looked like Liu Xi would be able to get out of her mess eventually and probably help rescue the others. Now it looks more like Liu Xi is in serious trouble and the others will recover and rescue her.
> In retrospect I hope it'll become clear how all the elements of our plotline were related and how various key characters got good development arcs. I hope.
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Noted.
> > Unless one of the small-time spells Xander gave her isn't so small-time after all.
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> I haven't worked out the detail of how this all ties up yet.
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You never know. Xander has designed weirder things before.
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- Saving the Future – Part 16: One Moment In Time - version 2 · The Hooded Hood addresses one of his longest-running subplots · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 09:15:12 am EDT
- The write was good and the rewrite was even better. (no text) · champagne · Mon Jun 16, 2008 at 06:35:59 pm EDT
- Very intriguing rewrites... · Nats · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 11:55:17 pm EDT
- Some clever and intriguing adjustments... · Visionary · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 10:36:33 pm EDT
- Comments version 2 · Anime Jason · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 04:39:22 pm EDT
- And this just makes even more complications. · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 12:19:13 pm EDT
- Nicely edited (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 13, 2008 at 09:43:55 am EDT
- On this. · HH · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 07:02:46 am EDT
- My thoughts · Scott · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 08:56:22 pm EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 04:27:19 am EDT
- Now, I'm quite fond of you. If you'd like to exchange your soul for certain success, let me know. (no text) · The Dainty Satan · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 01:36:36 am EDT
- Hey, I like you plenty. Of course, if you wanted to bribe me with some baked goods, I suppose I could like you more... · Visionary · Thu Jun 12, 2008 at 12:08:22 am EDT
- Nobody hates you man · Hatman · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 11:17:20 pm EDT
- Has it really been that long? · L! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 09:25:30 pm EDT
- Why would we hate you for doing what you should be doing? · Nats · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 04:43:32 pm EDT
- I don't dislike you, and I don't think anyone else here does, either. Things happen. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 01:48:09 pm EDT
- One question: · killer shrike · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 07:17:38 am EDT
- Re: My thoughts · Anime Jason · Wed Jun 11, 2008 at 12:33:39 am EDT
- Right then. Carry on. Sorry to be an oik or bounder or whatever. Just didn't want your well-written story to go to waste. (no text) · Nats · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:07:54 pm EDT
- I remember... · Anime Jason · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 09:51:12 am EDT
- I want the story back! (and the next one) · Anime Jason bring common sense...hopefully · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 01:33:50 am EDT
- If I say "Roni Y. Avis", does that mean people will stop asking me to finish "Happiness"? (no text) · Visionary's just happy he doesn't have to bribe other people to use his characters. · Tue Jun 10, 2008 at 12:36:56 am EDT
- Response to the resent events. · L! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 10:50:55 pm EDT
- I'll second Nats' nomination of "Nick O'Time." This story is too good to remove. (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 06:43:43 pm EDT
- Bah. · Nats · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:07:27 pm EDT
- This is ridiculous (no text) · killer shrike realizes he is the worst person to say this, given his past antics, but still..... · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 05:01:42 pm EDT
- Reserved Characters · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Jun 09, 2008 at 04:03:16 pm EDT
- Aw dang. · Scott · Sun Jun 08, 2008 at 01:21:42 am EDT
- So, this is all just an elaborate scheme to get [spoiler] laid? (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! nonetheless enjoyed seeing both his characters and songs he recognized from his favorite decade · Sat Jun 07, 2008 at 12:31:08 am EDT
- Thank God for this. Now that poor subplot can stop the running. Or at least slow down to a jog, or perhaps a power walk. (no text) · Nats · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:08:59 pm EDT
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- Hmmm... and yet she doesn't seem the motherly type. · Visionary · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 07:08:15 pm EDT
- Interesting. Most Interesting. · L! · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:11:25 pm EDT
- Still? · HH · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 02:19:20 pm EDT
- I think the title is a song too. [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 12:25:42 pm EDT
- Interesting (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:21:31 am EDT
- Quite a surprising diversion (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 11:06:09 am EDT
- Oh... Crap. · Manga Shoggoth · Fri Jun 06, 2008 at 10:26:08 am EDT
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