> I'm curious to see whether Sally switches over to our side. I don't know if we've ever had a person with stretching powers on the team (unless you count Finny or the Shoggoth that way)
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I'm still in two minds about it. I think JJJ would be keen, but it would contravene one of the membership rules I've always adhered to - one poster, one LL member ever (unless the first character is gone for good, as with Jarvis and Avatar).
> I'm enjoying both Chad and Ronnie's predicaments; under the tender care of Mumphrey and Drury they should be fine. Well, most of their limbs should be intact, anyway.
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I struggle to write the characters, but it has to be done.
> Al and the Librarian are a fun team-up, and a natural fit together. I don't know if they've ever teamed like this before, but it's about time.
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it's a shame psoter Al isn't around to kibbutz.
> I particularly liked how the Stunulators couldn't hit Marie as much as Hallie may have tried. Nice touch.
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It made sense to me. The Mansion likes Marie.
> The Shoggoth is very amusing in human form. I particularly liked his attempt at an anime-style attack; that was laugh out loud funny.
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The bigger questions we haven't covered yet is why he's in human form and what are the consequences.
> Glory stole her scene, as usual. Her response to the Lassie comment was a nice touch.
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She's a great character.
> And of course my favourite part of this chapter was the return of Yo!
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That was always a possibility but I didn't make a final decision until the very scene when I wrote it. On the other hand, the Land That Common Sense Forgot catches all kinds of detritus.
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- Saving the Future – Part 11: An Age Undreamed Of · The Hooded Hood dumps a huge amount of random scenes in the hopes that people can wade though them. Great marketing or what? · Wed May 07, 2008 at 03:02:16 pm EDT
- Rippingly good stuff, by Crom! (no text) · Dancer. · Sun May 18, 2008 at 07:12:02 am EDT
- Lots of great scenes here. More detailed comments after work (no text) · Hatman · Fri May 09, 2008 at 09:50:17 am EDT
- That was even more than average brilliant. I'm sorry I didn't read it earlier but I needed to wake upo this moring for SATs and stuff. · Rhiannon · Thu May 08, 2008 at 11:37:34 am EDT
- Alas and a lack... · Manga Shoggoth · Thu May 08, 2008 at 09:16:39 am EDT
- A day. · HH · Thu May 08, 2008 at 07:17:36 pm EDT
- Too much good stuff to comment upon! [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu May 08, 2008 at 04:54:43 am EDT
- It would certainly take a lot of dreaming to cover it all. · Visionary · Thu May 08, 2008 at 12:17:12 am EDT
- What dreams are made of? [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Wed May 07, 2008 at 11:21:35 pm EDT
- Interesting. Very Interesting. · L! · Wed May 07, 2008 at 05:51:16 pm EDT
- Still? · HH · Thu May 08, 2008 at 12:28:56 am EDT
- Lots of great scenes in this, but I enjoyed the duelling hunchbacks best · killer shrike · Wed May 07, 2008 at 04:58:37 pm EDT
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