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champagne (but edited and approved by HH himself)
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Subj: Chavin culture? They are seriously digging up Chavs?Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 at 04:40:11 am EDT (Viewed 324 times)
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> “We don’t know much about the Chavin peoples,†Loring said. “They had textiles, pottery, metalwork. They made religious items. They used hallucinogens. But no, we’ve never seen anything like this before. In fact this entire site is a bit of a puzzle.â€Â
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> As the smoke cleared, Loring, Lindsey and Zane all realised that another of their party was dead. The medical kit tweezers were jammed through Matt’s left eye socket and up into his brain.
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Ah. Chekov's Tweezers.
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 Champagne and the Land That Common Sense Forgot · champagne (but edited and approved by HH himself) · Wed Apr 30, 2008 at 11:35:42 pm EDT
- I'd have guessed the butler. (no text) · Dancer likes these but gets baffled every time · Sun May 18, 2008 at 07:10:35 am EDT
- I love these Champagne mysteries, even if I don't usually figure them out! :) (no text) · Hatman · Fri May 02, 2008 at 12:41:39 am EDT
- She's a lot better at solving a mystery at an archeological site than the Scooby gang. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu May 01, 2008 at 11:52:41 pm EDT
- The third draft was even better than the others. Well done. (no text) · HH · Thu May 01, 2008 at 09:19:56 am EDT
- Another crafty, cunning conundrum (no text) · killer shrike · Thu May 01, 2008 at 06:01:22 am EDT
- Chavin culture? They are seriously digging up Chavs? · Manga Shoggoth · Thu May 01, 2008 at 04:40:11 am EDT
- Mysteries seem to follow her everywhere. · Anime Jason
 · Thu May 01, 2008 at 01:52:21 am EDT - Archeologists... When will they ever learn? · Visionary · Thu May 01, 2008 at 12:14:09 am EDT
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