> ... He'd feel very uncomfortable passing judgment on people in this reality, just because of what they did in another reality. Between that bit of hypocrisy, and the heroes taking away someone else's freedoms on the presumption that they're guilty until proven innocent, Dream and the Lair Legion felt a bit too much like Tony Stark and the Pro-Reg heroes in Civil War for my tastes. I hate criticizing an otherwise cute and funny story, but this one unintentionally managed to hit a few of my sore spots. Thank you for writing it, though.
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 Real life, since I can't post another story yet ... · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 01:44:02 am EDT
- Comments about Books inside.. · L! · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:14:56 pm EDT
- I'm thinking of selling some of my books too, just not sure which ones yet. (no text) · Hatman wishes his car was still on warranty · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 09:56:49 am EDT
- You know, you'd probably be better fed if you let them keep you in prison (no text) · killer shrike, scared and confused by this strange new "comment" option · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:31:32 am EDT
- Maybe if you mixed the Ramen and Chef Boyardee together, and added slices of student loan officer? (no text) · HH · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 07:50:30 am EDT
- Now Im picturing you as a cross between Jimmy Olsen and a character from Sin City :-) · Dancer got nervous driving faster than 20mph and wants to be played by Jessica Alba in the movie · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 07:15:42 am EDT
- Hmm. That should have been more yellow than it turned out. (no text) · Dancer hopes you can write her more stories soon. Same goes for KS. KS writing stories for me, I mean,. he can write some for you too if he really wan · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 07:19:25 am EDT
- You first (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:35:00 am EDT
- Yes, more stories from the two of them please. And Hatty. And HH. And Jason. And, I don't know... Some in Yellow would be lovely... (no text) · Visionary There's a comment field now? What does this do? · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:10:21 am EDT
- Like this one? · Dancer does her bit. Now where are all of your stories??? · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 10:33:32 am EDT
- Vizh is late again! (no text) · Anime Jason
 · Tue Apr 15, 2008 at 01:19:09 am EDT - Great funny stuff. (no text) · champagne laughed stuff out through her nose. You don't want to know. · Mon Apr 14, 2008 at 09:33:45 pm EDT
- If you can whip up such great quality stories so fast, you clearly need to do more of them :) (no text) · Hatman · Mon Apr 14, 2008 at 03:11:33 pm EDT
- Very funny, but I'm not sure that the LL made the cleverest cause of action. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 05:09:32 am EDT
- Hmmm... maybe. Do you have any others I could check to make sure? · Visionary · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 10:24:40 pm EDT
- You learn something new everyday... · L! · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:19:15 pm EDT
- Especially after what Dream was just through ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:06:00 pm EDT
- Hidden Dancer story above - everyone should read it! (no text) · HH thought it was an intriguing one too. · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 07:06:37 pm EDT
- Taze him again! · killer shrike · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 11:27:31 am EDT
- And you too (no text) · killer shrike · Fri Apr 11, 2008 at 08:36:06 am EDT
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