Tales of the Parodyverse - Hmmm. Nicely unbalanced....

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Manga Shoggoth

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In Cognito

Subj: Hmmm. Nicely unbalanced....
Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 05:10:35 am EDT (Viewed 433 times)

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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 01:03:14 am EDT

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Faceless · In Cognito · Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 01:03:14 am EDT
- It left me wanting more, so that a good thing, right? · Dancer. · Sat Apr 05, 2008 at 08:21:17 am EDT
- So ... [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 03:42:55 pm EDT
  - It's interesting that you see that in there... [Spoilers] · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:17:23 am EDT
- A powerful opening. Proceed. (no text) · HH · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 12:44:44 pm EDT
  - I'll most likely proceed to other writings, but this was never intended to be anything other than a minimalist approach to suspenseful science fiction. · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:12:31 am EDT
- Hmmm. Nicely unbalanced.... (no text) · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Apr 03, 2008 at 05:10:35 am EDT
  - If only someone would've given him a Zoloft.. · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:10:34 am EDT
- Canada is clearly the problem here. Mustn't trust countries on these shifty moderne continents... (no text) · The Dainty Satan · Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 11:39:51 pm EDT
  - Much like the French and the Catholics in the Middle Ages, Canada probably gets too much mockery for our own good. However, they *did* give the world Tom Green. · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:08:23 am EDT
- This shows promise. If there's more, that is. (no text) · Anime Jason · Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 07:50:35 pm EDT
  - More ideas/plots, but this particular avenue, so to speak, is closed. · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:05:39 am EDT
- Would it have helped to have been thinking happy thoughts? (no text) · Visionary found the story intriguing. Nicely done. · Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 07:20:29 pm EDT
  - Victims of traumatic situations like this usually don't have the time to have happy thoughts--but then, I've said too much. · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:04:21 am EDT
- Interesting · Hatman · Wed Apr 02, 2008 at 12:30:39 pm EDT
  - Re: Interesting · In Cognito · Fri Apr 04, 2008 at 02:00:13 am EDT