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Subj: Re: And the healing begins...Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 08:50:49 pm EDT (Viewed 334 times)
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 08:21:10 pm EDT |
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> A nice job of starting the resolutions with this chapter. I thought you did a nice job of talking the characters through what happened and how it affected Liu Xi.
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Liu Xi is starting to get more and more used to disasters, so naturally she handles each one a little better.
> On a side note, I am curious as to why you often seem to write your stories from Hatman's perspective rather than from that of your own characters. Is it a conscious choice when you start out, or just the way the story flowed?
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I thought of multiple different ways to write it. Usually they follow a certain theme, and in this one it was discovery. Since Hatman was, no offense, the most clueless one in the story, naturally he had the most discovery to do.
But that's just the first chapter. The second one starts from Anna's point of view, and the third starts from Lara's.
> I look forward to seeing where Lara went...
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Chapter 3.
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 Adventures in Parodyverse - Unmoderated Part 1 · Anime Jason · Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 12:27:06 am EDT
- A lot of good dialogue here.  I like the interaction between your characters. (no text) · Catbot · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 06:06:01 pm EDT
- Hmm...I'm a little dense, aren't I? :) (no text) · Hatman · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 11:48:37 am EDT
- I see Hatty as a bit more dynamic than this, but this topic did need dealing with (no text) · Dancer likes angst · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 04:51:12 am EDT
- A necessary conversation, yes. :) (no text) · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 02:19:02 am EDT
- And the healing begins... · Visionary · Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 08:21:10 pm EDT
- So where's Lara? (no text) · killer shrike · Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 09:06:05 am EDT
- How does Anna know what Liu Xi did with Doorman? (no text) · HH thinks she needs lessons in confidentiality in any case · Thu Mar 13, 2008 at 05:48:48 am EDT
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