> As always: an interesting read. A bit confusing in parts, but then battles can be confusing with all that is going on.
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The writing about them shouldn't be, though. It probably reflects how confused I got in multiple redrafts.
> In reading the story, I think I have figured out a way I can explain the whole HB/STL mix up, no need to change anything on your part. The use of C-Class as S.P.A.M. agents was inspired, I hadn't even thought of that.
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What's worrying is I thought I got it from you.
> Not really sure how I'll resolve Kat in all this. Her being at the final fight of The Moderator seems odd to me. I still need to figure out a way to explain Mr. Spooky's appearance & cryptic message to the young Miss Gillespie. Then there a few other things to work with or around. But, then that not for you to figure out: it's mine.
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I don't think she really was part of the final fight so much as caught up in it at the wrong moment. But I reasoned that once she was there she'd not just run away. In fact it was her idea that defeated the villain.
> I look forword to seeing what you prestn with us next. Maybe something about the Hood's Daughter?
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Not for a while yet, although it's possible I've already done it.
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- The Moderator Saga #48: Absolute Moderation · 10,000 words of conclusion from... the Hooded Hood. · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 02:11:31 pm EST
- Well done Ian and all on penning a really great series. One for the record books :-) (no text) · Dancer is impressed with all of you · Fri Mar 14, 2008 at 04:51:37 am EDT
- Wonderful! Alas, no time to write comprehensive replies...Work crazy again. (no text) · Manga Shoggoth · Mon Mar 10, 2008 at 09:24:06 am EDT
- You always wait till I'm away before writing stuff, well almost always. (no text) · Rhiannon · Sun Mar 09, 2008 at 11:04:21 am EDT
- Excellent work! When do we start the next obscenely long round robin? · Visionary · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 05:09:40 pm EST
- I only counted 9,999 words. · Anime Jason · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 04:39:53 pm EST
- Uh.. Mr. Waston, sir. I have found a possible small problem with the story... [Spoilers] · L! · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 04:14:24 pm EST
- An impressive conclusion. Two questions: [Spoilers] · killer shrike · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:59:22 pm EST
- We figured we didn't see you at the chat because you might have been working on this · Hatman · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:35:54 pm EST
- A comprehensive conclusion. [Spoilers] · CrazySugarFreakBoy! · Sat Mar 08, 2008 at 03:21:24 pm EST
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