> ... You're fine.
> Actually, your scene there kind of gave me permission to write my scene here how I wanted. If we, as the readers, thought that April was in more significant peril than she actually is, I would have felt compelled to have Dream seriously angsting over her fate. As it is, because she seems to be relatively safe (until Ian or someone else throws their own twists in), as long as I still showed that Dream is ultimately concerned about April, I felt I could get away with the borderline flirty small-talk between him and Vicki here.
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My guess would be that the fake broadcast won't go off without a hitch. Fortunately the in-prison group is planning an emergency escape contingency. But it's also possible they'll have leave so quickly they'll have to choose who they can take with them.
> > I'm sure when this is all over, Al B Harper or Anna (who's been recently trained to repair Yuki) can tune up CSFB!'s new arm so it works better.
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> I was already thinking Dream and Yuki, at least, would share a scene in which they discussed their respective appendages.
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I figured at some point Dream would ask Yuki how long it took her to get used to it.
> Are we cool, by the way?
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Yes, I don't usually get angry at anyone but myself.
