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Subj: Rhiannon reminded me that the Hood's favorite game is dominoes; the sort you line up in rows.
Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 at 01:22:59 pm EST
Reply Subj: Why is it always chess? Why not Chutes and Ladders, or Donkey Kong?
Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 at 10:54:28 am EST


> The Moderator seems to be earning those italics before his name with this one. Not that I think he's going to win, but he certainly has things set up well for the showdown.

At 4am this morning it seemed to me that what we were missing were: 1. A clear goal for or heroes to thwart or our villain to achieve; 2. A ticking clock; 3. Evidence of the Moderator working to a plan; 4. Ways of bringing the threat level up and involving some of the individal characters; 5. A reason to bring the cast together for a final confrontation.

> A fun, chilling chapter with excellent character work on the villain!

I'm still hoping to get in bits that cover how Salieri goes to get his mother and how the good guys recruit VelcoVixen.




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