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> A lovely introduction for a very mysterious character. I thought you did an excellent job of describing her compact world and allowing us to see it as both beautiful and confining, connecting us with the character. I hope you have further plans for this lonely young woman...
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Yes, I'm already writing the next bit, since it's the holidays I've got much more time. I'm glad I did a good job to portray Aellas somewhat enclosed world, I hope to explore deeper into the less obvious issues someone living like that will feel.
Do you think I should continue splitting the story with half of it told by first person?
