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Subj: The only person it would have been more dangerous for Lodestone to affect is probably Uhuna.Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 10:10:37 pm EDT
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> My compliments to Dancer on a very snazzy character shot! Not that it couldn't have used a bit of Regret in there as well. Or more of her bits...
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I hadn't expected Tom to turn up in my in-tray, so I'll take what I can get.
> A very entertaining introduction to a new character. Don't get me wrong... I'm glad he was threatened a few more times there at the end. But I don't begrudge him getting the hot devil girl as a set up for further adventures. Hot devil girls are what make some adventures worth taking, after all.
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It felt as though Tom needed a complication in his life - beyond being an accidental supervillain thrust onto the world villainy stage whether he likes it or not, with a legacy of evil to maintain and the violent mistrust of Earth's greatest heroes. Fortunately Regret wants him to become the baddest of the bad, so that's alright.
> I enjoyed Asil's beatdown of Lionel, and the reasoning behind it. Frightening to see it, no doubt... Much like Hatty, I don't easily see Asil in a sexual light, no matter how easily such things came to her genetic donor. Still, I don't mind her going medieval on Loadstone... Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.
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It did feel strange, but I hope I kept things in reasonably good taste.
The upside of all this is that CSFB! gets to do Ironsides jokes to Lodestone for a while to come.
> I also quite liked Mumph and Vizh's visit to the Heckfire club. They needed more than a stern talking to for what they tried to pull. Really, people seem to forget that whole Parody Master thing so quickly.
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The Legion did have Donar drop the Heck-Fire Club's twenty million dollar yacht through their two hundred million dollar mansion. That's more than a stern talking to.
And really that encounter was a battle just as vicious and deadly in its way as anything in the Parody War.
> Fun and inventive... I look forward to seeing more!
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I hope to get back to Tom eventually, after some other projects.
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- Tom Black #4: Portents of Armageddon · The conclusion of the story, including a free mildly adult content warning, from... the Hooded Hood · Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 12:16:12 pm EDT
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- I've a feeling this is only the start of something. (no text) · Rhiannon · Fri Oct 26, 2007 at 11:45:06 am EDT
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- Structures of wood and canvas seldom do well in a storm. · Manga Shoggoth · Thu Oct 25, 2007 at 04:41:17 am EDT
- At least she didn't get her hands on any Cool Whip. · Visionary · Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 08:30:20 pm EDT
- Looks like I did ask the right question last time. [Spoilers] · Anime Jason · Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 06:47:33 pm EDT
- *Spoiler* Support staff member was by far the scariest in this chapter · Hatman · Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 02:57:55 pm EDT
- Two women in the shower?! I've only ever had one, and she was inflatable! [Spoilers] · killer shrike · Wed Oct 24, 2007 at 02:13:22 pm EDT
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