> A good ol' slobberknocker for an autumn afternoon. It was a well choreographed fight scene, with a good ending... What more could one ask than a little mindless violence for football season? Both of your characters are very versatile, and you used that advantage well in the story.
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Football season starts in the spring here, and ends in November.
I just hope I didn't go too far in allowing Harvester the ability to fly, but since he needs to keep his arms rigid like wings I figured that would be a reasonable liability.
> You need to write on a whim more often...
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If only I had the time. I had to turn down my church's youth group yesterday in regards to being a group leader because I'm simply too booked.
~Hat~
