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Spaztic Chyld


Location: USA
Member Since: Tue May 18, 2004
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So... I'm stumbling. I've had a good run with the first chapter of my book. However, as I start the second chapter, I'm considering revising the whole chapter. As it stands now, the chapter I have written adds something into the storyline that I'm not sure fits.

In essence, what I'm asking for is for a volunteer reader to read both versions of Chapter 2 and get back to me on it. I am going to type what I have written, and in a couple of weeks I should have the second version.

Please let me know if you have experience in this area and if you'd be willing to lend an ear! Thanks!

Your long forgotten friend,
-Spaztic Chyld






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Member Since: Fri Jan 02, 2004
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...I'd be willing to have a look, 'though I can't guarantee the results.

Emails through the board should reach me (failing that, I lurk every so often).





As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment. I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.

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